Just read this! I absolutely loved these. The first one was adorable, I love both of those characters. The second...yeah. Rather chilling. The allegorical angle of it is just so heavy. Glad to have read this!
Not to rain on things, but the last page(13) has the line "They seemed seemed to shiver." That typo made me chuckle. It didn't take away from 'what' shivered in the fading light on the last page.
Stories is still good, don't worry. Kinda wish there were illustrations like the Iosefka book had. Style is still nice.
Literally just saw these go up but I'm ready for some high quality literature from the best rat author ever
Update: Amazing work as always, some excellent cute stories about lesbians! I really enjoy the way you describe stuff like smooth bone and the ecstasy of a clean surface. Can't wait to see what you make next!
A lovely pair of well-written stories. The Mari one is funny and charming. The cottage one is very strong, with great mood and pacing, and some innovative storytelling.
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Just read this! I absolutely loved these. The first one was adorable, I love both of those characters. The second...yeah. Rather chilling. The allegorical angle of it is just so heavy. Glad to have read this!
Not to rain on things, but the last page(13) has the line "They seemed seemed to shiver." That typo made me chuckle. It didn't take away from 'what' shivered in the fading light on the last page.
Stories is still good, don't worry. Kinda wish there were illustrations like the Iosefka book had. Style is still nice.
I'm always amazed by how easy it is for silly typos to slip past multiple people before publishing, good spotting :P
Thank you so much : ) im so glad to hear you've enjoyed my writing!
Literally just saw these go up but I'm ready for some high quality literature from the best rat author ever
Update: Amazing work as always, some excellent cute stories about lesbians! I really enjoy the way you describe stuff like smooth bone and the ecstasy of a clean surface. Can't wait to see what you make next!
aw thank you so much!
A lovely pair of well-written stories. The Mari one is funny and charming. The cottage one is very strong, with great mood and pacing, and some innovative storytelling.
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